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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Komodo Dragon Descriptive Writing Competition


At the end of last term I posted a competition asking children to write their best description about the menacing komodo dragon. Not many people entered however the children who did used descriptive language linking with facts about the komodo dragon. Well done.

The winner of the competition is Cian H. He won the book "The Dangerous Book for Boys"

Winner description:

The komodo dragon sees a pig and the pig goes up to the komodo dragon and touches it. The pig becomes very ill and the komodo dragon rips it in half and swallows it in four big bites and the pig is killed.


Well done Cian. Another competition will be posted shortly and we will be using our skills we are learning in our 'Persuasive Writing'.

1 comment:

Nick said...

well done Cian great effort boy!!!!!