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Showing posts with label Term 2 Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Term 2 Week 4. Show all posts

Friday, May 14, 2010

Persuassive Writing


I am absolutely positively against this rule about bikes having to be riden on the road no matter what!

Firstly, toddlers. My sisters are three, sometimes when we go to the park just down the road from us, they go crazy. If they go crazy on the road... Would you feel safe with your toddler in the middle of the road?

Secondly, I am strongly against this because toddlers and their height. If a van, truck or bus backed out toddlers are way not the same height... Bus versus toddlers who would win?

Thridly, toddlers and the road rules. I can't teach my sisters the road rules in one day.


By Finn M


Finn is currently completing this piece of writing.
This is a fantastics start Finn. I enjoyed your emotive language and how you have structured your arguments in to paragraphs. Well done.
Mister A

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Inquiry Questions

Write an open ended BIG idea question for the class to explore tomorrow.

An idea could be

What animals did the ANZACs use during war?