The big ginormous shark lunges and lurks in the under waters. The Great White Shark is well adapted to the murky waters of South Africa.
TGhe beastly sea enemy has very scary razor sharp teeth and likes to lunge out of the murky waters to feed on his prey.
The monster is very brave but very scary especially when encircling innocent seals. Seal pups only swim on top of the water and the Great White Shark sees them and eats them up.
To be continued.
By Piper A
Fantastic description Piper. I am pleased you have used a variety of sentence starters and key words from our brainstorm. Excellent! Keep up the great writing.
Mister A
TGhe beastly sea enemy has very scary razor sharp teeth and likes to lunge out of the murky waters to feed on his prey.
The monster is very brave but very scary especially when encircling innocent seals. Seal pups only swim on top of the water and the Great White Shark sees them and eats them up.
To be continued.
By Piper A
Fantastic description Piper. I am pleased you have used a variety of sentence starters and key words from our brainstorm. Excellent! Keep up the great writing.
Mister A
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Great piece of writing Piper!
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