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Monday, February 22, 2010

Descriptive Writing - Gustave The Crocodile








Over the past few weeks the children in the Room 8 writing class have been writing descriptions about animals. We first looked at the majestic tiger and then Gustave a large male Nile crocodile that plagues rivers in Burundi.

The children were learning how to use decriptive language to make their stories exciting and engaging for the reader.

The stories attached were very descriptive and engaging.

Well done to Luka, Lucy, Evelyn, Grace and Nikaylah.

Please read and post a comment.

2 comments:

jussy said...

Well done girls - great descriptions had me hooked .

Anonymous said...

I love all those wonderful descriptive words that you all used, I hope poor Jerry the fisherman was ok Lucy!! Bernie